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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence written correctly (Thank you in advance) ?

Moreover, I am fully aware of all new technologies used in the process of teaching and I am expert in using MS Word, Office, Excel and all kind of computer related work. Overall I am a loyal, patient and caring person who enjoys working with other people.
  

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It sounds OK, kouroshh, but it could use tightening and refining: Moreover, I am conversant with the new teaching technologies and am expert in MS Word, Office, Excel and other major computer-related software. Overall I am a loyal, patient and caring person who enjoys working with others.

  • It sounds OK, kouroshh, but it could use tightening and refining: Moreover, I am conversant with the new teaching technologies and am expert in MS Word, Office, Excel and other major computer-related software.
  • Overall I am a loyal, patient and caring person who enjoys working with others.
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It sounds OK, kouroshh, but it could use tightening and refining:

Moreover, I am conversant with the new teaching technologies and am expert in MS Word, Office, Excel and other major computer-related software. Overall I am a loyal, patient and caring person who enjoys working with others.

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