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The inspiring keynote talk by professor Hawking at the closing ceremony of ACS conference (2018) concerning the theories of evolution has been drawn my full attention.
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kouroshh1 The inspiring keynote talk by professor Hawking at the closing ceremony of the ACS conference (2018) concerning the theories of evolution has been drawn my full attention. At a minimum I'd change it as shown above. But in my opinion there is too much information in one sentence.
- kouroshh1 The inspiring keynote talk by professor Hawking at the closing ceremony of the ACS conference (2018) concerning the theories of evolution has been drawn my full attention.
- At a minimum I'd change it as shown above.
- But in my opinion there is too much information in one sentence.
- I'd break it up into two or more sentences.
- CJ
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