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Kouroshh Posted 13 years ago
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Why do you want to work at McDonald's?

First, because of the reputation of McDonald's. Second, I could improve my Polish while I am working and communicating with staffs and costumers. In addition, since a cost of living is very high in Poland this job could help me to handle my living cost.
  

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kouroshh First, because of the reputation of McDonald's. Second, I could improve my Polish while I am working and communicating with staffs and costumers . In addition, since a cost of living is very high in Poland (,) this job could help me to handle my living cost.

  • kouroshh First, because of the reputation of McDonald's.
  • Second, I could improve my Polish while I am working and communicating with staffs and costumers .
  • In addition, since a cost of living is very high in Poland (,) this job could help me to handle my living cost.
  • I suppose the subject is a student studying in Poland.
  • Your passage has many grammar and senamtic issues.
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kouroshhFirst, because of the reputation of McDonald's. Second, I could improve my Polish while I am working and communicating with staffs and costumers. In addition, since a cost of living is very high in Poland (,)this job could

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