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Nikoer30127 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence wordy or ....?

Please revise this sentence for me if you think it's not natural for a native to speak.

Please give it to me after class

Please give it to me after this class is over

Please give it to me when this class is done.

Please give it to me when this class done.
  

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Please give it to me after class. Please give it to me after(when) this class is over. (slightly wordy, but nothing wrong with it) Please give it to me when this class is done.

— Holyduke

  • Please give it to me after class.
  • Please give it to me after(when) this class is over.
  • (slightly wordy, but nothing wrong with it) Please give it to me when this class is done.
  • These 3 are fine.
  • The last one is incorrect.
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Please give it to me after class.

Please give it to me after(when) this class is over. (slightly wordy, but nothing wrong with it)

Please give it to me when this class is done.

These 3 are fine. The last one is incorrect.

You can subsitute give with hand if you want. Your first 3 sentences are fine.
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Thank you very much!!! :-)
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I think first one should be "Please give it to me after the class". Last one is definitely incorrect. Rest two sentences are OK.
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