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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence worded properly?

Riverwind escaped Xak Tsaroth with the staff, and eventually managed to return to his tribe, but he was delirious and weakened from the injuries he had sustained during his quest.
  

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Ditch the first comma.

  • Ditch the first comma.
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Ditch the first comma.

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