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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence worded properly?

Steel’s true mother was Kitiara Uth Matar, the infamous Dragon Highlord, and he was unaware and had no desire to inquire into his father’s identity, who was in fact the great Solamnic Knight hero Sturm Brightblade.
  

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of which he was unaware, and he had no...

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  • of which he was unaware, and he had no...
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cboutin3and he was unaware
...of which he was unaware, and he had no...
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Thanks for your help, but my meaning is not getting across so how is this revision? Steel’s true mother was Kitiara Uth Matar, the infamous Dragon Highlord, and until he was in his early twenties, he was unaware and had no desire to inquire into his
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Aha! Then, to avoid confusion as I had, go with "...twenties, and he was unaware..."
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Shouldn't I not have the "and" after "twenties," because I'm referring to Steel's father, Sturm?
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I don't see it that way.
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Okay well how could I make the sentence clearer?
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