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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Relying on Dawnbringer to manipulate Konnal at first, Cyan eventually disposed of his pawn and maneuvered himself into a position as Konnal’s chief advisor, at the same time letting himself be "discovered" in the forest in his dragon form by the elves often enough to keep them afraid and distracted.
  

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