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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence worded in the correct way?

The pair witnessed the draconian creation process and then recovered the metallic dragon eggs, before fleeing to the Dragon Isles.
  

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The sentence is ok, but I would consider the context; I would be more descriptive with regard to the part that says "recovered the metallic dragon eggs".

  • The sentence is ok, but I would consider the context; I would be more descriptive with regard to the part that says "recovered the metallic dragon eggs".
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The sentence is ok, but I would consider the context; I would be more descriptive with regard to the part that says "recovered the metallic dragon eggs".

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