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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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The fallen members of the group of adventurers known as the Companions of the Hall (the former dwarf king Bruenor Battlehammer, the halfling Regis, the barbarian warrior Wulfgar, and Catti-brie, a Chosen of Mielikki and a beginner wizard), having died and had their souls taken to the magical forest of Iruladoon, were given a choice by the goddess Mielikki, the Forest Queen.
  

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