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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Due to House Veruna’s actions in dealing with Aesperus and abandoning the field during the battle at Lendon’s Dike, Grigor revoked the trading coster’s concessions and banned them from Hulburg, a promulgation that the Merchant Council chose not to protest.
  

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