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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence worded in the best way?

Pledged to the service of the dark goddess Takhisis and her knighthood, the blue dragon Flare was trained for battle by the human woman Sara Dunstan, and grew to love her as much as any dragon could love a mortal.
  

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It's OK. I hope you won't be offended if I comment that, since we seem to be editing a huge text for you, it would be nice to get an occasional 'please' and/or 'thank you'. Clive

— Clive

  • It's OK.
  • I hope you won't be offended if I comment that, since we seem to be editing a huge text for you, it would be nice to get an occasional 'please' and/or 'thank you'.
  • Clive
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It's OK.

I hope you won't be offended if I comment that, since we seem to be editing a huge text for you, it would be nice to get an occasional 'please' and/or 'thank you'.
Clive
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Hi Clive, I'm sorry about that but thanks a lot and I really appreciate all the help you and the others have given me.
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