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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence worded correctly, particularly the end part?

The elves were joined by a human resistance group that operated in the area, but during the journey, the allied force encountered dragonarmy soldiers and was defeated in the ensuing battle.
  

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Omit the comma after 'journey'.

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  • Omit the comma after 'journey'.
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Omit the comma after 'journey'.
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