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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence worded correctly?

Through the combined efforts of Sara and a local druidess, they were able to return Kitiara to good health, and she gave birth to a son, whom she decided to name Steel Brightblade.
  

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I'm not sure who they are. As written, it can't refer to Sara and the druidess. Otherwise: With the help of a local druidess, Sara was able...

— Philip

  • I'm not sure who they are.
  • As written, it can't refer to Sara and the druidess.
  • Otherwise: With the help of a local druidess, Sara was able...
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I'm not sure who they are. As written, it can't refer to Sara and the druidess. Otherwise: With the help of a local druidess, Sara was able...
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Thanks, your revision was exactly what I was looking for.
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