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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Is this sentence worded correctly?
This action accomplished two goals for Fistandantilus, firstly that he could now direct the Kingpriest, and secondly he would be allowed to study a Portal to the Abyss secretly.
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I would delete the word "that" and change the first comma to a colon. "allowed to study a Portal to the Abyss secretly" may not be right, depending on what "a Portal to the Abyss" means. It is hard to tell without more context.
- I would delete the word "that" and change the first comma to a colon.
- "allowed to study a Portal to the Abyss secretly" may not be right, depending on what "a Portal to the Abyss" means.
- It is hard to tell without more context.
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I would delete the word "that" and change the first comma to a colon.
"allowed to study a Portal to the Abyss secretly" may not be right, depending on what "a Portal to the Abyss" means. It is hard to tell without more context.
"allowed to study a Portal to the Abyss secretly" may not be right, depending on what "a Portal to the Abyss" means. It is hard to tell without more context.
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