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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence worded and strutured correctly?

After Rashas and many of the other senators were slaughtered by the minions of Chaos, Gilthas led the elven forces bravely in the defense of Qualinost alongside the Dark Knights, winning him the admiration of his people
  

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bravely before led I'm not sure if the Dark Knights were alongside Qualinost or Gilthas.

  • bravely before led I'm not sure if the Dark Knights were alongside Qualinost or Gilthas.
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bravely before led I'm not sure if the Dark Knights were alongside Qualinost or Gilthas.
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How can I word it so the Dark Knights fought alongside Gilthas and the elven forces?
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After Rashas and many of the other senators were slaughtered by the minions of Chaos, Gilthas led the elven forces bravely in the defense of Qualinost alongside the Dark Knights, winning him the admiration of his people

...Gilthas led the elven forces, alongside the Dark Knights, in a brave defense of Qualinost, which won him the admiration of his people.

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