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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is this sentence well-written?

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Is this sentence well-written?

With the aid of this device, we will help you to get rid of such skin aesthetics- and health-related issues as pigmentation, excess hair, ingrown hair and acne.

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No. What is a skin aesthetic?

  • No.
  • What is a skin aesthetic?
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What is a skin aesthetic?
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It should mean that with the device it will be possible to get rid of skin health issues and other problems related to the beauty of the skin, like pimples etc.
Could you please help me to re-word it?
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This device will help you to treat skin diseases, defects and problems such as port-wine stains, moles, rashes, eczema, acne, psoriasis, warts, sunburn and folliculitis.

Does it also remove tattoos?

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