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A folk dancer's dream in becoming a masked artists' master burns to ashes as he has an affair with the artistry master's wife and is killed right in his dance outfit. Without doubt, he returns to avenge.
  

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A folk dancer's dream of becoming a master mask artist turns to ashes when he has an affair with his master's wife and is killed in his dance costume . ) then returns to avenge his murder.

  • A folk dancer's dream of becoming a master mask artist turns to ashes when he has an affair with his master's wife and is killed in his dance costume .
  • ) then returns to avenge his murder.
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A folk dancer's dream of becoming a master mask artist turns to ashes when he has an affair with his master's wife and is killed in his dance costume. His ghost (?) then returns to avenge his murder.

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