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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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Is this sentence well written?

In this six-part 30-minute series will follow Japanese illusionist Cyril Takayama with hidden cameras as he surprises unsuspecting locals and tourists in Rio de Janerio with magical moments.
  

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"will follow" is missing its subject. Perhaps you mean "we will follow" or "we follow". Deleting "In" at the start would be another possible solution.

— GPY

  • "will follow" is missing its subject.
  • Perhaps you mean "we will follow" or "we follow".
  • Deleting "In" at the start would be another possible solution.
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"will follow" is missing its subject. Perhaps you mean "we will follow" or "we follow". Deleting "In" at the start would be another possible solution.
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