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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary

Is this sentence well-worded?

Hi!
Is this sentence well-worded?

The official drew the mother's attention to the fact that the situation regarding departure of a minor person from the Republic of Estonia is altering; therefore, when traveling abroad, it is advisory to get into touch with the diplomatic mission of the target country and to clarify requirements imposed upon the minor.

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] rules about the departure of minors from Estonia.

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  • ] rules about the departure of minors from Estonia.
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The first sentence is a little wordy:

The official explained to the mother the changing [or is it changed?] rules about the departure of minors from Estonia.

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With a minimum of changes:

The official drew the mother's attention to the fact that the situation regarding the departure of a minor person from the Republic of Estonia is changing; therefore, when traveling abroad, it is advisable to get into touch with the diplomati
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