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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Is this sentence well-phrased/grammatically correct

“Their sugar levels returned to normal after the surgery, enabling major cut downs in medicinal intake and subsequently freeing them of the illness.

  

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“Their sugar levels returned to normal after the surgery, enabling major reductions in medicinal intake and subsequently freeing them of the illness.

  • “Their sugar levels returned to normal after the surgery, enabling major reductions in medicinal intake and subsequently freeing them of the illness.
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“Their sugar levels returned to normal after the surgery, enabling major reductions in medicinal intake and subsequently freeing them of the illness.

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One possibility is;

“Their sugar levels returned to normal after the surgery, enabling major reductions in medicinal intake and subsequently a full recovery"

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