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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
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Is this sentence using 'wrote' and 'waking' acceptable?
Is this sentence using 'wrote their opinions' and 'waking the nationalistic spirit' acceptable?
Those French reporters wrote their opinions, complaints, and comments about the real status of their country at the hands of selfish invaders waking the nationalistic spirit of every Frenchman.
Those French reporters wrote their opinions, complaints, and comments about the real status of their country at the hands of selfish invaders waking the nationalistic spirit of every Frenchman.
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The sentence is acceptable.
- The sentence is acceptable.
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Your sentence is not wrong, but I have a few comments.
Reporters usually like to think they report the facts objectively, and not with opinions. complaints and comments.
The real status of their country is a somewhat unclear phrase.
It sounds like the invaders, not the reporters, woke the nationalistic spirit. Is this what you mean?
Reporters usually like to think they report the facts objectively, and not with opinions. complaints and comments.
The real status of their country is a somewhat unclear phrase.
It sounds like the invaders, not the reporters, woke the nationalistic spirit. Is this what you mean?
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CliveIt sounds like the invaders, not the reporters, woke the nationalistic spirit. Is this what you mean?No, Clive... That's not what I mean. Thank you for calling my attention...
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