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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is this sentence too long?
Is this sentence too long?
ABX manages all the key data associated with the majority of the UK's 55 million electricity supply points, delivers billing and customer registration services, manages supply allocation and administration for electricity suppliers and assists in implementing changes to the procedures and systems that enable the country's competitive electricity industry to operate.
ABX manages all the key data associated with the majority of the UK's 55 million electricity supply points, delivers billing and customer registration services, manages supply allocation and administration for electricity suppliers and assists in implementing changes to the procedures and systems that enable the country's competitive electricity industry to operate.
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No, but I wouldn't make it any longer.
- No, but I wouldn't make it any longer.
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For me, yes! It might not be too long for a person in the business. To be safe, restructuring would be a good idea.
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