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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence (short) fluent?

Hi!
Is this sentence (short) fluent? It is a slogan of a company, so it should be easy-to-understand and catchy? Any improvements needed?

We are a reliable partner on your way to a beautiful house!

Thanks!
  

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The English is OK, but it's not really catchy. However, I am not a particularly catchy person, so I can't suggest anything better. Is your company a builder or an estate agent?

— Fivejedjon

  • The English is OK, but it's not really catchy.
  • However, I am not a particularly catchy person, so I can't suggest anything better.
  • Is your company a builder or an estate agent?
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The English is OK, but it's not really catchy. However, I am not a particularly catchy person, so I can't suggest anything better. Is your company a builder or an estate agent?
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Thanks for the grammar approval Emotion: smile Yes, we build facades and process wooden materials!
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