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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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is this sentence right?

She fell to her hands and pulled her body close; sitting into a squat, face blushing crimson.
  

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Anonymous is this sentence right? The punctuation is off: the semicolon should be a comma. Overall, it does not seem quite natural.

— Mister Micawber

  • Anonymous is this sentence right?
  • The punctuation is off: the semicolon should be a comma.
  • Overall, it does not seem quite natural.
  • It sounds as if she merely squatted, hugged her knees and blushed.
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Anonymous is this sentence right?
The punctuation is off: the semicolon should be a comma.
Overall, it does not seem quite natural. It sounds as if she merely squatted, hugged her knees and blushed.
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