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MIG Posted 14 years ago
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Is this sentence right?
Is the following sentence right?
why i need to persuade a captive hero with gold to work for me.
why i need to persuade a captive hero with gold to work for me.
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It's not exactly clear what "with gold" modifies. Also, it sounds like you want your sentence to ask a question, but you've not used the right form. Why should I need to use gold to persuade a captive hero to work for me?
- It's not exactly clear what "with gold" modifies.
- Also, it sounds like you want your sentence to ask a question, but you've not used the right form.
- Why should I need to use gold to persuade a captive hero to work for me?
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It's not exactly clear what "with gold" modifies.
Also, it sounds like you want your sentence to ask a question, but you've not used the right form.
Why should I need to use gold to persuade a captive hero to work for me?
Also, it sounds like you want your sentence to ask a question, but you've not used the right form.
Why should I need to use gold to persuade a captive hero to work for me?
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Thanks avangi.
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