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Silak12 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Is this sentence right?
Hye everyone! could you please help me correcting this or it is alright as it is.
''Man who has been shot often doesn't survive unless he is arrived at the hospital instantly"
Thanks!
''Man who has been shot often doesn't survive unless he is arrived at the hospital instantly"
Thanks!
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It is not all right. There are so many variables with being shot that it is hard to know how to begin correcting it. ' Rover
- It is not all right.
- There are so many variables with being shot that it is hard to know how to begin correcting it.
- ' Rover
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It is not all right.
There are so many variables with being shot that it is hard to know how to begin correcting it.
I'll make a start:
'A man who has been critically shot often doesn't survive unless he receives immediate hospital treatment.'
Rover
There are so many variables with being shot that it is hard to know how to begin correcting it.
I'll make a start:
'A man who has been critically shot often doesn't survive unless he receives immediate hospital treatment.'
Rover
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Hi,
The following is my revised version:
Most often, people who have been seriously shot cannot survive unless they are *rushed to the hospital at once.
*Or: conveyed (formal); admitted (formal).
Regards
The following is my revised version:
Most often, people who have been seriously shot cannot survive unless they are *rushed to the hospital at once.
*Or: conveyed (formal); admitted (formal).
Regards
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