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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Is this sentence right

Please find the following message from Peter to you from my Msn
  

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Sounds awkward, and is unclear. You're trying to stuff up a lot of information in a single sentence. ' I hope it helps.

  • Sounds awkward, and is unclear.
  • You're trying to stuff up a lot of information in a single sentence.
  • ' I hope it helps.
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Sounds awkward, and is unclear. You're trying to stuff up a lot of information in a single sentence.

However, If one really wants to express everything in one sentence, it could be something like the following -
'Please find the following message, sent by peter from my msn'
'Please find the following message that has been sent by peter using my msn, and is for you.'

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