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Ahava_yin Posted 20 years ago
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Is this sentence right?

Hi everyone,

Is the following sentence right? I feel it strange but don't know whether it's right or not.

"He found himself in a growing feeling got out of control due to anger, misery and protest."

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I would reword it: He found himself losing [spinning out of] control, a captive of his own anger, misery, and resentment .

  • I would reword it: He found himself losing [spinning out of] control, a captive of his own anger, misery, and resentment .
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I would reword it:

He found himself losing [spinning out of] control, a captive of his own anger, misery, and resentment.

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