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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence properly worded?

Joelle and Malik had been instructed by their patron deities to take the Eye to the earth primordial Grumbar’s temple in the Underchasm in order to thwart Shar’s plans to drive Grumbar away from Toril.
  

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" Otherwise, it seems correct, albeit clunky. Precisely what it means is lost on me entirely.

  • " Otherwise, it seems correct, albeit clunky.
  • Precisely what it means is lost on me entirely.
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I think "earth primordial" might be "earth's primordial." Otherwise, it seems correct, albeit clunky. Precisely what it means is lost on me entirely.

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