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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence properly worded?

Upon the companions’ arrival at the monument, Silvara cast a sleep spell over Gilthanas and his friends, and she then spoke with the mysterious mage Fizban.
  

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and then she spoke... [ sounds better to my ear ] If you had started a new sentence there (without 'and'), your word order would have sounded just fine.

— Philip

  • and then she spoke...
  • [ sounds better to my ear ] If you had started a new sentence there (without 'and'), your word order would have sounded just fine.
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...and then she spoke... [ sounds better to my ear ] If you had started a new sentence there (without 'and'), your word order would have sounded just fine.
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Upon the companions’ arrival at the monument, Silvara cast a sleep spell over Gilthanas and his friends, and then proceeded to speak with the mysterious mage Fizban.
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