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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence properly worded?

Palin was attached to the band of Solamnics as a mage and was captured, and he took his brothers’ bodies back to Solace with the Dark Knight Steel Brightblade for a proper burial.
  

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No problem with the structure, but I don't see how the first part (before 'and') and the second part are correctly joined by that conjunction. If it fits the story, don't worry about it.

— Philip

  • No problem with the structure, but I don't see how the first part (before 'and') and the second part are correctly joined by that conjunction.
  • If it fits the story, don't worry about it.
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No problem with the structure, but I don't see how the first part (before 'and') and the second part are correctly joined by that conjunction. If it fits the story, don't worry about it.
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