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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Malystryx also made each of the other dragons swear to aid one another from assault by the lesser dragons, and she set about increasing her forces once more.
  

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Malystryx also made each of the other dragons swear to aid one another in case of assault by the lesser dragons, and she set about increasing her forces once more.

  • Malystryx also made each of the other dragons swear to aid one another in case of assault by the lesser dragons, and she set about increasing her forces once more.
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Malystryx also made each of the other dragons swear to aid one another in case of assault by the lesser dragons, and she set about increasing her forces once more.
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Thanks for your help, how is this revision? Malystryx also made each of the other dragons swear to aid one another if they were attacked by the lesser dragons, and she set about increasing her forces once more.

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