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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence properly worded?

Mina and her army bypassed the shield due to the power of the One God, and then marched directly to Silvanost, the elven capital city.
  

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cboutin3 , and then they marched directly to Silvanost, the elven capital city. I would make these two changes to make the sentence flow better.

— Philip

  • cboutin3 , and then they marched directly to Silvanost, the elven capital city.
  • I would make these two changes to make the sentence flow better.
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cboutin3 , and then they marched directly to Silvanost, the elven capital city.
I would make these two changes to make the sentence flow better.
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