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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Sturm and his friends successfully completed their mission in the ruined city, during which they defeated the black dragon Khisanth, and then returned to Solace, armed with the knowledge of the true gods on the Disks.
  

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Often, many problems with punctuation in long sentences can be removed by separating sentences. cboutin3 Sturm and his friends successfully completed their mission in the ruined city, during which they defeated the black dragon Khisanth. They then returned to Solace, armed with the knowledge of the true gods on the Disks.

  • Often, many problems with punctuation in long sentences can be removed by separating sentences.
  • cboutin3 Sturm and his friends successfully completed their mission in the ruined city, during which they defeated the black dragon Khisanth.
  • They then returned to Solace, armed with the knowledge of the true gods on the Disks.
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Often, many problems with punctuation in long sentences can be removed by separating sentences.
cboutin3 Sturm and his friends successfully completed their mission in the ruined city, during which they defeated the black dragon Khisanth. They then returned t

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