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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence phrased awkwardly?

Do you think my sentence is phrased awkwardly or does it work?

The huge hangar doors open to reveal an army of men in military clothes led by one man in a suit.

  

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Hi That's perfect. I can imagine it as part of a thriller novel. You have the words just right Dave

  • Hi That's perfect.
  • I can imagine it as part of a thriller novel.
  • You have the words just right Dave
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Hi

That's perfect. I can imagine it as part of a thriller novel. You have the words just right

Dave

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