Is this sentence perfect

No, it is not perfect.

AnonymousFor a champion to keep alive his passion for success, needs companionship of a master.

Perfect sentence it's not, but it is a perfect riddle! It made me read it over and over agian trying to extract the essence of your sentence. I failed!

sir indeed i was trying my hands to come up a line that advertise Rolex watch

This line followed by Rolex watches name now how it sounds...........

Incomprehensible.

Hello, Anon. If you will continue to submit advertising copy, it would be good for you to register, so that we can identify you as an individual (without needing your real name, of course)-- that way, we can recognize that it is the same person each time and not be so confused by your sentences.

To fire his passion for success, a champion needs

Grammar GeekIncomprehensible.

Sometimes, this kind of "incomprehensible" line is very affective in advertising. It makes people try to tie the slogan to the product and thus allows the product to be subbliminally imprinted in our memory bank. Just like the slogan "It's The Real Thing" and "When It Rains, It Pours". However, this one for Rolex does

Yeah, well, I get "when it rains, it pours" because it means it doesn't get all sticky.

I have no idea how an expensive watch helps a champion keep his drive for winning.

But then, I change the channel when the current round of McDonald's commercials come on, so perhaps I'm just out of it.