Hi On an okayish scale of one to ten, it's only getting a four from me (though I enjoyed reading it) - The worst thing he created was the poison that was a world disaster Your sentence might work in a graphic novel, as something said, but otherwise, it's not so good Dave
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What about this one: "Poison was by far the worst thing he created, regarded as a world disaster."?
On an okayish scale of one to ten, it's only getting a four from me (though I enjoyed reading it)