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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence okay?
Practical training for managers who manage cleaners on a daily basis. Over the course of training participants in accordance with the intended formula will mutually interact and thus raise their skills for managing cleaners
Can I write like this?
Thank you a lot!
Can I write like this?
Thank you a lot!
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It is far too wordy. This is plenty: Practical training for managers wh o supervise cleaners daily. Participants will interact and raise their management skills.
- It is far too wordy.
- This is plenty: Practical training for managers wh o supervise cleaners daily.
- Participants will interact and raise their management skills.
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It is far too wordy. This is plenty:
Practical training for managers who supervise cleaners daily. Participants will interact and raise their management skills.
Practical training for managers who supervise cleaners daily. Participants will interact and raise their management skills.
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