Is this sentence OK?
Dr. Chen is an excellent doctor in sports medicine and arthroscopy to whose progress in his profession I have borne witness with my own eyes over the years.
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It is OK grammatically, but it is a bit intricate, your witnessing is not a trait of his, and "bear" is not called for. You testify when you bear witness, and you mean only that you witnessed it. I recommend breaking it into two sentences.
- It is OK grammatically, but it is a bit intricate, your witnessing is not a trait of his, and "bear" is not called for.
- You testify when you bear witness, and you mean only that you witnessed it.
- I recommend breaking it into two sentences.
- Dr.
- Chen is an excellent doctor in sports medicine and arthroscopy.
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It is OK grammatically, but it is a bit intricate, your witnessing is not a trait of his, and "bear" is not called for. You testify when you bear witness, and you mean only that you witnessed it. I recommend breaking it into two sentences.
Dr. Chen is an excellent doctor in sports medicine and arthroscopy. I have witnessed his progress in his profession with my own eyes over the years.
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