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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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A significant and important part of the brain is the pre-frontal cortex. This part of the brain has many neurotransmitters, such as dopamine, serotonin, and norepinephrine, suggested to be responsible for controlling human emotions.

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Anonymous can it be written any better/clearer? Yes. An important part of the brain is the prefrontal cortex, which contains many neurotransmitters (such as dopamine, serotonin and norepinephrine) responsible for controlling human emotions.

  • Anonymous can it be written any better/clearer?
  • Yes.
  • An important part of the brain is the prefrontal cortex, which contains many neurotransmitters (such as dopamine, serotonin and norepinephrine) responsible for controlling human emotions.
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Anonymouscan it be written any better/clearer?
Yes.

An important part of the brain is the prefrontal cortex, which contains many neurotransmitters (such as dopamine, serotonin and norepinephrine) responsible for controlling human emotions.

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