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Lisicong Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Sharks are in the top of the ocean food chain,they absorbed heavy metals when they eating the other kind of fishes. These heavy metals were accumulated that led to the heavy metal content in their bodies is more and more higher.
  

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Sharks are at the top of the marine food chain, so they ingest quantities of heavy metals when they eat other fish . These heavy metals accumulate in their bodies.

— Mister Micawber

  • Sharks are at the top of the marine food chain, so they ingest quantities of heavy metals when they eat other fish .
  • These heavy metals accumulate in their bodies.
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Sharks are at the top of the marine food chain, so they ingest quantities of heavy metals when they eat other fish. These heavy metals accumulate in their bodies.
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Hi;
Here are some suggestions for you:

Sharks are at in the top of the ocean food chain. (you must not join 2 sentences with a comma) They absorbed heavy metals when they eating the other kinds of fishes. These heavy metals were accumulate, and this leads to increasing that led to th
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Thank you for your help Mister Micawber!!
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Thanks a lot for your suggestions!!
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