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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
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Is this sentence of mine using such conjunctions as 'but' and 'as' acceptable? Does it sound logical?
Is this sentence of mine using such conjunctions as 'but' and 'as' acceptable? Does it sound logical?
The first time Madam Thompson taught narrative writing, she felt very tired, but later when she read the thoughtful narratives originally written by her students, she felt very relaxed as she told herself, “If they become more imaginative, they will be better writers.”
The first time Madam Thompson taught narrative writing, she felt very tired, but later when she read the thoughtful narratives originally written by her students, she felt very relaxed as she told herself, “If they become more imaginative, they will be better writers.”
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"Originally written" means that the narratives were written several times, though the students were the first to write them. the thoughtful, original narratives written by...
- "Originally written" means that the narratives were written several times, though the students were the first to write them.
- the thoughtful, original narratives written by...
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"Originally written" means that the narratives were written several times, though the students were the first to write them.
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...the thoughtful, original narratives written by...
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...the thoughtful, original narratives written by...
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