Is this sentence odd or not?

Yes, it is quite odd.

What can I write instead of it?

Anonymous What can I write instead of it?

That depends. What does the last part mean? Did she lose her voice when she got married?

CJ

Yes, she did.

Anonymous Yes, she did.

OK. Then you need to make that clearer in your sentence.

She had the best voice and it was admitted by the most critiques until the day she married him

Most critics admitted that she had the best voice, but then she married him and lost her voice.

Of course, somewhere before this you have to say who "s

Okay, thank you