Is this sentence natural? Which one to use? Degree course

by taking a Engineering degree course at MIT will make me acheieve mastery in robotics and replace employers with robots and help make America step forward .

Or.

by taking an Engineering degree course at MIT. The course will make me acheieve mastery in robotics and replace employers with robots and help make America step forward .

What about formality. How can make it the sentence professional and formal?