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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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Mousikau is studying English, Computer Science which has never been taught in his school. He decide to make a portfolio so he can put his work in and use his portfolio for the uni admission. He wrote:

Everything included in the portfolio such as my descriptive writing, poems, literary analysis, TI programming etc... are never been taught in my school.

  

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Mousikau is studying English and Computer Science, which hav e never been taught in his school. He decide d to make a portfolio so he can put his work in it and use it for the uni admission. He wrote: Everything included in the portfolio , such as my descriptive writing, poems, literary analysis, and TI programming etc...

  • Mousikau is studying English and Computer Science, which hav e never been taught in his school.
  • He decide d to make a portfolio so he can put his work in it and use it for the uni admission.
  • He wrote: Everything included in the portfolio , such as my descriptive writing, poems, literary analysis, and TI programming etc...
  • have are never been taught in my school.
  • If you say 'such as', we know there are others, so don't also say 'etc'.
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Mousikau is studying English and Computer Science, which have never been taught in his school. He decided to make a portfolio so he can put his work in it and use it for the uni admission. He wrote:

Everything included in the portfolio, such as my descriptive writing, poems, literary analysis, and TI programming

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