Is this sentence natural in spoken English? 3672

How is your friend at school mate?

I feel like they are drifting away from me. They are not just drifting away from me. They also treat me like an idiot. I got a teacher's compliant about the tawdry assignment I've made and I suddenly look at my classmate next to me. He said don't look at him he is not going to help me. I was like--what? I didn't need his help. I look at him just because that I can't make an eye contact to the teacher who is picking my paperwork apart.

Note: This is not a novel or essay. Some repetitive pronouns may be made to replicate speaking and haven't been checked because when we are speaking. We can't correct our mistakes.