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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence natural?

Story: I've contacted the bank to change the account number and they make me a new card.

I've got a new bank account they renew the card and the account number but the balance remains.

  

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You have several problems here. Story: I've contacted the bank to change the account number and they make me a new card. make is an incorrect tense here.

  • You have several problems here.
  • Story: I've contacted the bank to change the account number and they make me a new card.
  • make is an incorrect tense here.
  • I've got a new bank account they renew the card and the account number but the balance remains.
  • You have at least two sentences wrongly joined together here.
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You have several problems here.


Story: I've contacted the bank to change the account number and they make me a new card.

make is an incorrect tense here.


I've got a new bank account they renew the card and the account number but the balance remains.

You have at least two sentences wrongly joined together here.

renew

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