Is this sentence natural?
Here I am again. 
Could you please check the below sentence?
I feel that something does not work well.
When the person assumes erroneously that he restores things by excuses, in fact he disrupts the peace in his relationship with his neighbour.
Top answer
) The sentence is grammatical, but awkward-sounding. It's wordy and redundant. It would be better with most of the words omitted, for example: Too many excuses, made too often, destroys relationships.
- ) The sentence is grammatical, but awkward-sounding.
- It's wordy and redundant.
- It would be better with most of the words omitted, for example: Too many excuses, made too often, destroys relationships.
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(The following is based on US usage.)
The sentence is grammatical, but awkward-sounding. It's wordy and redundant. It would be better with most of the words omitted, for example:
Too many excuses, made too often, destroys relationships.
0The whole sentence does not work well. It is not until the end that I realize you are talking about problems with your neighbour.
I suggest you try to rewrite it, starting with
When you have a problem with your neighbour, . . .
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