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Yobib Nartea Posted 11 years ago
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Pedestrian safety has always been the primary concern of the University of Oxford

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Pedestrian safety has always been the primary concern of the campus police department at the University of Oxford, because a lot of students ride their bicycles on the footpaths. Collisions with pedestrians have been a real problem.

  • Pedestrian safety has always been the primary concern of the campus police department at the University of Oxford, because a lot of students ride their bicycles on the footpaths.
  • Collisions with pedestrians have been a real problem.
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Pedestrian safety has always been the primary concern of the campus police department at the University of Oxford, because a lot of students ride their bicycles on the footpaths. Collisions with pedestrians have been a real problem.

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