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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Is this sentence logical in English?
Hi!
Could you please take a look and tell me whether this sentence is logical in English?
However, upon entering into force of the aforementioned regulations, the content of standards of subjects of study did not change on the merits.
Is it okay that there are three "of" so close to each other?
Thank you!
Could you please take a look and tell me whether this sentence is logical in English?
However, upon entering into force of the aforementioned regulations, the content of standards of subjects of study did not change on the merits.
Is it okay that there are three "of" so close to each other?
Thank you!
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The three "of"s are not necessarily wrong, but overall the sentence is more or less incomprehensible to me.
- The three "of"s are not necessarily wrong, but overall the sentence is more or less incomprehensible to me.
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The three "of"s are not necessarily wrong, but overall the sentence is more or less incomprehensible to me.
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thank you for your input!
Is this better:
However, enforcement of the aforementioned regulations did not change the content of standards of subjects of study on the merits.
Is this better:
However, enforcement of the aforementioned regulations did not change the content of standards of subjects of study on the merits.
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The part after the last comma is incomprehensible to me. Can you say it another way?
Clive
Clive
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